Post by caroletPost by krwPost by VickyOn Wed, 29 Jun 2022 18:17:10 -0000 (UTC), Mike McMillan
Oh dear. YUCK. And is it repetition or deviation? Two scenes where
someone walks in and gets the wrong idea. Another episode of
wrongness and depressing outcomes.
I have yet to listen to this week but where (objectively) should the
Writer : Naylah Ahmed
Director : Peter Leslie Wild
Editor : Jeremy Howe
Are the individuals involved. Can anyone with a decent memory comment
on how long the first of these has been involved and if there have
been decent scripts in the past?
Number two on the list has been around for some time and I certainly
have doubts about number 3 - the story inconsistencies which have been
permitted in the Chris and Alice story and the complete retcon from
Brian over helping Chris have been outwith my acceptance levels.
Naylah Ahmed has been involved since 2017, she has been credited 4 or 5
times a year since then (except 2020 when she was named 10 times, but
most of those were in conjunction with another writer).
Peter Leslie Wild has been involved since May 2012. He was directing 3
or 4 weeks per year initially. It was up to 9 in 2017 and has been 5 to
10 since.
Jeremy Howe took charge in 2018, so the other two have both been around
longer than him.
I'm afraid that I don't notice any difference between the output of
different writers, or directors, so I can't help with the second part of
your question.
Thank you for your stats Carole. I think the 2020 double credit for
writers were the monologues which had to be turned around rapidly and
they were each writing two episodes a week.
I feel that some of the problems stem from most of the week simply being
a two way exchange - take the party when the conversations were
exchanges and no real sense of it being a party with a multi-way
discussions - very much a covid like overhanging cloud acting as a
constraint. Heated exchanges tend not to work well on radio - where the
range and expressiveness of voices needs to be utilised to the maximum.
Add to that the difficulties in identification and it all becomes a
difficult listen.
For the moment I think I feel it is largely a writer problem with a
second helping of poor direction to tone down the raised voices. The
scene setting and storylines are so important on t'wireless and it feels
missing.
I think I need to start thinking about weeks that work well / badly and
see who was responsible.
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